Huh. Who Woulda Thunk It?
One of the things the Writers' Workshop people stressed was to write to music. They said to pick songs your characters like. (Writers are scary people. We know this.)
It would appear that, unlike me, neither of my characters at this part of the story like Neil Diamond. While that is fine, if anybody in this book likes Pearl Jam there will be deaths. Ugly, messy, bloody deaths. That is all.